Plese spell chalk, and make sure your grammer is gooder! However, if you are going to self-publish a book, remember that your cover should not look like a Powerpoint slide that I made when I was fourth grade.
There will probably be a part two at some juncture. Part of being an author is that I often have people send me their own books, manuscripts or ideas.
If they all read like they could be part of the Borg, thinking alike, acting alike, all going for the same goal for the same reasons, then readers won't care when they die in a fiery explosion. Your spell-check program really cannot tell which witch is which, that's your responsibility.
I get to read a plethora works in so many different genres. Photograph: Alexander F. Workers paint wind turbine blades in northern China.
Huh, you have an Australian wizard named "Barry Totter" who goes to a magical boarding school where he will inevitably face off against an evil, undead, wizard named "Voltebart. Check out the five funniest winners of the Lyttle Lytton Contest: "As I felt the vampire sexily drinking the blood from my neck, the warmth between my legs grew both in wetness and in fear for my life.
Bulwer-Lytton's own sentence, "It was a dark and stormy night; the rain fell in torrents — except at occasional intervals, when it was checked by a violent gust of wind which swept up the streets for it is in London that our scene liesrattling along the housetops, and fiercely agitating the scanty flame of the lamps that struggled against the darkness", takes the opposite approach, running to 59 words.
Do not steal major plot devices or entire plots from already published bestselling works. As long as your readers have literally been living in a shack in the middle of the woods somewhere for the last decade and a half, then I'm sure they will find your material new and exciting.
I do not care how brilliant you think a manuscript, chapter or line is at the time you write it.